My favorite place is rooftop of my house. Actually, my house is condominium. Sometimes, I feel sad, or not happy, I go to rooftop of my condominium. We can view very beautiful sight from there. Especially, in the evening, the sight we can view from there is the best!! The evening sun, mountains, buildings, sky, there are a lot of beautiful things. In the midnight is also great, because we can discuss our problem there with my friends with drinking alcohol and eating some snacks. But we don't make noise. I love that silent time. That's why my favorite place is rooftop of my condominium.
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Hey Yuji,
Where is your favorite fall activity quick post for today? It was due within the first ten minutes of class. It should have two or more labels: favorites, quickposts, and perhaps another label or two that you are likely to use on future posts.
Where is your brainstorming post in preparation for the second essay this semester? I find no post listing additional words and phrases relating to your favorite place(-s) that occurred to you within five to ten minutes after free-writing about your favorite place? You should have posted that list during class, and labeled it: essay prep., favorites, lists, and quickposts, too.
With only one post published so far this semester (a free-writing exercise about a favorite place, this post), you are ten or more posts below the minimum of five posts per week for the past two weeks. You also are missing at least two book reviews (one per week minimum, 150+ words in length), a draft first essay (website review, due Sept. 29, followed with comments and replies), and a rewritten version of that essay (due Oct. 6, 325+ words in length, including feedback from comments and replies on your draft).
If you expect to earn credit for Writing IV this year, you'd better get your act in gear--before it's too late!
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